ext_17170 ([identity profile] annearchy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] marie_j_granger 2011-11-20 04:30 am (UTC)

Oh that was adorable!! I really liked the argument and then the H/Hr discussion,

[Ginny] had never realized how much it irritated him when she acted like they were the second coming of James and Lily Potter.

Well, neither did JKR ;)

If you don't mind a tiny bit of Brit-pickery, you might want to change "whining" to "whinging" and "dating" to "going out with".

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